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 # Sharing
 
-Most of the viewer state are [saved in the URL](../advanced/url.md). Therefore, bookmarking / sending URL is a good way of saving / sharing a view of interest. Users may also generate a more human readable URL.
+Most of the viewer state are [saved in the URL parameters](../advanced/url.md). Therefore, bookmarking or sending your browser's current URL is a reasonable way of saving / sharing the currently selected view of interest. However, the full URL's are lengthy, difficult to read, and often broken by automatic text formatting in emails. 
 
-A share button has been added in [v2.2.0](../releases/v2.2.0.md) to simplify this process.
+We therefore offer a way to generate a more human readable URL for the given view. A share button has been added in [v2.2.0](../releases/v2.2.0.md) to simplify this process.
 
 [![](../autogen_images/share_highlightShareBtn.png)](../autogen_images/share_highlightShareBtn.png)
 
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ A share button has been added in [v2.2.0](../releases/v2.2.0.md) to simplify thi
 `Create custom URL` will allow users to create a more human readable URL. 
 
 !!! warning
-    Links generated by unauthenticated users will expire after 72 hours.
+    Any links generated by unauthenticated users will expire automatically after 72 hours.
 
 [![](../autogen_images/share_highlightShareURL.png)](../autogen_images/share_highlightShareURL.png)